{"id":424072,"date":"2019-08-13T13:00:29","date_gmt":"2019-08-13T17:00:29","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/?p=424072"},"modified":"2019-08-13T13:23:30","modified_gmt":"2019-08-13T17:23:30","slug":"nabokov-proofing-nafisi","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/2019\/08\/13\/nabokov-proofing-nafisi\/","title":{"rendered":"Reread, Rewrite, Repeat"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Some years ago,<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0I was invited on an editorial trip to Buenos Aires, where we were given a walking tour of the more literary areas of the city, including a bar where Polish ex-pat Witold Gombrowicz used to hang out.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The tour guide told us a story about how Gombrowicz\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">hated\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Borges and would frequently, drunkenly, rant a<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">bout just how crappy Borges was as a writer.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cOne time, when he was railing against Borges\u2019s latest book, a drinking compatriot asked him if he had\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">read the book. \u2018What?! Why would I waste my time on trash like that?\u2019\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/nafisi.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-424082\" src=\"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/nafisi.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"220\" height=\"333\" \/><\/a>This anecdote came to mind tonight, as I was reading the opening chapter to Azar Nafisi\u2019s\u00a0<\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/yalebooks.yale.edu\/book\/9780300158830\/other-world\"><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">That Other World<\/span><\/i><\/a><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">: Nabokov and the Puzzle of Exile<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, translated from the Persian by Lotfali Khonji.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">At a party for his students, he railed against Laurence Olivier\u2019s film adaptation of\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Hamlet<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. One student asked whether he had actually seen the film, and he replied: \u201cOf course I haven\u2019t seen the film. Do you think I would waste my time seeing a film as bad as I have described?\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Although it\u2019s not actually in there, I can imagine a scene in Rodrigo Fres\u00e1n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u2019s<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Dreamed Part\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">in which the Author\u2014after his attempt to merge with the so-called God particle at CERN in hopes of transforming himself into something otherworldly, capable of rewriting all of reality over and over again\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">to fit his aesthetic desires like some sort of nutty-professor version of David Haller\u2014<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">is lying in bed, unable to sleep, thus unable to dream, thus unable to write or live. (It\u2019s all a bit complicated\u2014just go with me for a moment.)<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">I can imagine him lying there, delivering a most scathing\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">indictment of cell phones, Twitter, and our tendency to write more than we read (if we assume tweeting is \u201cwriting\u201d and reading is something other than emoji-interpretation)\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">all while taking a massive shit on some second-rate contemporary writer. Like his\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">archnemesis,<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">IKEA.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">When he finished his diatribe, slightly out of breath, internally pleased with a few of his\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">darts, well aware that most of the audience was silently tweeting his comments out to the world with hashtags like #LOLAngryWriter or #<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">OldAndOutofTouch<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0when someone asks him about IKEA\u2019s latest best-seller<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">: Has he read it?<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cOf course not. Why waste my time on a book like that when I could spend time with Nabokov\u2019s\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Transparent Things<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, the perfect book to read, reread, or re-reread while you\u2019re here in Switzerland.\u201d<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nafisi\u2019s book is broken up into seven chapters,\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">each addressing one or more of Nabokov&#8217;s works, organized under a particular <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">theme. Like \u201cCruelty:\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Pnin<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">.\u201d Or \u201cHeaven and Hell:\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Ada or Ardor.<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201d Most of the big books are all in here\u2014<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Lolita\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">and\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Pale Fire\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">and<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Gift<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u2014but there\u2019s also\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Look at the\u00a0<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Harelquins<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">!<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0A<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> late work that I\u2019m guessing some readers haven\u2019t really ever heard of, and a book that I bought at Fres\u00e1n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u2019s<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0urging when he was here in Rochester. I had read the title, but nothing more than that.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">As much as I consider myself a Nabokov fan, there are a few books I just never got around to. (And a number that I read when I was too young, too silly.)\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Rodrigo sold me on this book\u2014which I still haven\u2019t read, but will before the summer is over\u2014by showing me the\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cOther Books by the Narrator\u201d page where, instead of Nabokov\u2019s actual titles, you find this:<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">In Russian:<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Tamara\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1925<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Pawn Takes Queen\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1927<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Plenilune<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1929<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Camera Lucida\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">(Slaughter in the Sun) 1931<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Red Top Hat\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1934<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Dare\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1950<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">In English:<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">See under Real\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1939<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Esmeralda and Her\u00a0<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Parandrus<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1941<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Dr. Olga\u00a0<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Repnin<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1946<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Exile from\u00a0<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Mayda<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1947<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">A Kingdom by the Sea\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1962<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Ardis\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">1970<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">A\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nabokov-phile<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0will see through this. (<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Tamara\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">=\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Mary<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">;\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Camera Lucida\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">=\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Eye<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">;\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Ardis\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">=\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Ada<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">;\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Exile from\u00a0<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Mayda<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">=\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Pale Fire.<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">) What a very\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nabokovian<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0game!\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">According to Rodrigo\u2014and the author in\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Dreamed Part<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u2014it\u2019s basically Nabokov\u2019s parody of what a\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nabokovian<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0novel\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">is.\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">He\u2019s re-writing himself. His books. His go-to anecdotes and narrative tricks. (Not that Nabokov really repeated himself all that often. It\u2019s one of the things that makes him such a l<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">asting\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">author,\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">so rewarding to reread.<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">)<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">I\u2019m definitely going to use this anecdote from chapter one of Nafisi\u2019s book\u2014<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201cLife:\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Speak, Memory<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u201d\u2014which might be common knowledge, but which I hadn\u2019t come across before now:<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">During a lecture in Minnesota, when he had forgotten his notes and was forced to ad-lib, he gave his students a quiz on the approaches that distinguish a good reader. There are ten definitions, and the students had to choose a combination of four:<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a01.) <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The reader should belong to a book club.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">2.) The reader should identify himself or herself with the hero or heroine.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">3.) The reader should concentrate on the social-economic angle.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">4.) The reader should prefer a story with action and dialogue to one with none.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">5.) The reader should have seen the book in a movie.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">6.) The reader should be a budding author.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">7.) The reader should have imagination.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">8.) The reader should have memory.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">9.) The reader should have a dictionary.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">10.) The reader should have some artistic sense. <\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;134233279&quot;:true}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">In Nabokov\u2019s view, the readers should have imagination, memory, a dictionary, and an artistic sense.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">100% agree.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/9781948830058_FC.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-424122 alignleft\" src=\"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/9781948830058_FC.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"220\" height=\"330\" \/><\/a>Due to a quirk of how we produced Fres\u00e1n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u2019s<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> follow-up to the Best Translated Book Award-winning <\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Invented Part<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, I ended up spending between 7 and 8 hours a day every day last week proofing this forthcoming monster. A mere 543 pages in 6\u201d x 9\u201d format (probably something like 225,000 words?), <\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.openletterbooks.org\/products\/the-dreamed-part\">The Dreamed Part<\/a>\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">isn\u2019t\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">a book you can skim. It\u2019s a book that\u2014if you\u2019re going to proof it properly\u2014you need to pay attention\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">constantly<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. Not just to the individual sentences (paraphrasing here: \u201cIt\u2019s like Nabokov said, \u2018what\u2019s wrong with making a reader reread a sentence or two?\u2019\u201d) but to\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">all the references.\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">So many names! Rodrigo\u2019s mind is\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">encyclopedic<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">in a way that makes the Internet look like an<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0ABC book. And taking it upon myself to do the best job possible\u2014when you find a typo, don\u2019t tell me; I need to live with the common proofreader delusion that I\u2019m really good at this, remembering everything I found and never knowing about everything I missed\u2014<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">I looked up\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">everything<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. Every name. Every word that looked like it\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">might\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">be misspelled. (Spoiler: After an hour of proofing,\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">every single word looks misspelled.<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">)<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">And I hunted down every quote that I could find. All the bits from\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Wuthering<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0Heights\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">(this section is AMAZING)<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, the lines from Susan Sontag\u2019s intro to\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Halldor<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0Laxness\u2019s\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Under the\u00a0<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Glacier<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">,\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">and<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0the parts referencing\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nabokov\u2019s\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Transparent Things.<\/span><\/i><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Well, actually, on Saturday, I decided to celebrate my proofing accomplishment (<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">shhhhhhh<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">!!! I missed NOTHING<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">) by taking a 45 mile\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">round-trip bike ride to a brewery in Brockport, NY (you think Rochester is the boonies?), where had a couple beers and just read <em>Transparent Things<\/em> from cover to cover. <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">What a book!<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Back to Nafisi:<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nabokov\u2019s last novels were received more tepidly than the others, and\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Transparent Things<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, which came out in 1972, baffled many critics, among them John Updike. In Nabokov\u2019s opinion, \u201cAmongst the reviewers several careful readers have published some beautiful stuff about it. Yet neither they nor, of course, the common \u2018<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">criticule<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u2019 discerned the structural knot of the story.\u201d\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Look at the Harlequins!\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Was published two years later and was similarly greeted with review that were split between his keen readers and \u201chacks\u201d who found it less taxing than\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Ada\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">or\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Transparent Things<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Let\u2019s pause for a second on \u201c<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">criticule<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">.\u201d It\u2019s like the BuzzWire\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Listmaker<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0of the 1970s!\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Criticule<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. So dismissive in such a\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">dickish<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, erudite way.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/9780679725411.jpeg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-424142\" src=\"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/08\/9780679725411.jpeg\" alt=\"\" width=\"220\" height=\"339\" \/><\/a>In terms of it\u2019s basic story [SPOILERS AHEAD FOR THE SPOILER-AVERSE<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0WHO ARE ACTUALLY PLANNING TO ACTUALLY READ THIS NOVEL]\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.penguinrandomhouse.com\/books\/119464\/transparent-things-by-vladimir-nabokov\/9780679725411\/\">Transparent Things<\/a>\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">isn\u2019t necessarily convoluted.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">It\u2019s about Hugh Person returning to Switzerland for the fourth time in his life\u2014and first since his wife died. We read about his earlier trips\u2014the first in which his dad passed away, the second for his work as an editor in which he meets his future wife\u2014and then\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">find out that, off-screen, he strangled his wife in his sleep. (His somnambulism was established early on in the book.) Also off-screen: He goes to jail for murder but is exonerated and spends a number of years in an asylum. He no longer works as an editor.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The big-name author he worked with most\u2014a very pretentious character who Nabokov has way too much fun with, having him title his book <\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Tralatitions<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">and embody the truly\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">pervy<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0part of Humbert Humbert\u2014passes away.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">All that is straightforward. But the \u201cstructural knot,\u201d at least as\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">far as The Author in\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Dreamed Part\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">articulates it, is in the narration.\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Who is\/are the voices at the beginning and end who are telling this story? <\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Are they ghosts from beyond? The author? A\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">collective of writerly spirits?\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">When\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">we\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">concentrate on a material object, whatever its situation, the very act of attention may lead to our involuntarily sinking into the history of that object. Novices must learn to skim over matter if they want matter to stay at the exact level of the moment. Transparent things, through which the past shines!\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Man-made objects, or natural ones, inert in themselves but much used by careless life (you are thinking, and quite rightly so, of a hillside stone over which a multitude of small animals have scurried in the course of incalculable<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0seasons) are particularly difficult to keep in surface focus: novices fall through the surface, humming happily to themselves, and are soon reveling with childish abandon in the story of this stone, of that heath. I shall explain. A thin veneer of immediate reality is spread over natural and artificial matter, and whoever wishes to remain in the now, with the now, on the now, should please not break its tension film. Otherwise the inexperienced miracle-worker will find himself no longer walking on water but descending upright among staring fish. More in a moment.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">That \u201cmore in a moment\u201d is the most Fres\u00e1n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">-esque<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0sentence I\u2019ve ever read in a\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">non-Fres\u00e1n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0book.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">I\u2019m so glad that I read this book.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Rodrigo Fres\u00e1n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. Azar Nafisi. Dubravka Ugresic. Lila\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Azam<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Zanganeh<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. All writers I really like who have, more or less recently, written books that involved Nabokov in one way or another.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Which makes me want to a) read their books (which I have, minus Nafisi\u2019s), and b) read all the\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">weird\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nabokov books that aren\u2019t taught in World Lit 101.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">And the ones that are known, but aren\u2019t\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Lolita\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">or\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Pnin<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">or\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Pale Fire<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. Books like\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Bend Sinister\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">that I read while working at Quail Ridge Books, right after finishing\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Real Life of Sebastian Knight.\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">(Which I read in concordance with\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Real Life of Alejandro\u00a0<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Mayta<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">by Mario Vargas Llosa as some sort of self-imposed nerdy compare-and-contrast exercise.)\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">I want to reread those,\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">because rereading is sort of like rewriting\u2014I have the chance to take a set of memories and rework them in ways that are more visual,\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">richer, more complete and\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">detailed and fulfilling.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">This weekend, I want to go on a 50+ mile bike ride.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">It\u2019s part of my personal mid-life health crisis. I had to stop running for a while because I fucked up\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">my knee. Again. It\u2019s always cyclical. Feel so good, run\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">20 miles a few weeks in a row, dive into a pool, feel a pinch, limp for days. Get strong. Run again. Hope that it will help with the extra weight.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Push yourself. Break down. Try again.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">For the rest of the summer, I decided to bike to break my cycle<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">. (Ugh. #PunEverything?<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">)<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">My knee never hurts after riding, no matter how far I go, no matter how far I push myself, and this will sort of kind of keep me sort of kind of in shape?\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p>To give me a bit of added motivation, I&#8217;ve been biking to breweries around the area for a beer and lunch, and to read a bit before biking the return route. Thankfully, there are breweries\u00a0<em><a href=\"http:\/\/alloveralbany.com\/archive\/2018\/02\/27\/new-york-state-brewery-map-2018\">everywhere<\/a> <\/em>now. And they all put a lot of effort into their name and brand and design. I go to <a href=\"http:\/\/www.triphammerbierwerks.com\/\">Triphammer Bierwerks<\/a> (yeah, I know) a lot because I like their logo. And then there&#8217;s <a href=\"https:\/\/threeheadsbrewing.com\/\">Three Heads<\/a>, which is right around the corner from my house and has always embraced a stoner aesthetic. (Their flagship beer is &#8220;The Kind,&#8221; because obviously.) <a href=\"https:\/\/sevenstorybrewing.com\/our-story\">Seven Story<\/a> plays off of the 70-foot-high embankment that was created for the Erie Canal AND because every work of art follows one of seven plots.<\/p>\n<p>And then, there&#8217;s Rising Storm, which is 26 miles away (perfect for my upcoming ride) and sounds like something that you&#8217;d either see on a college basketball warm-up jersey or at a white supremacist rally.<\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">That\u2019s a joke I\u2019ve told four times today, and I\u2019m sure I\u2019ll repeat it to unwitting <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">interlocutors after my bike ride, when I\u2019m telling and retelling and reimagining my Rising Storm experiences as if life is fiction, as if life is\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">nothing more than a narrative to be shaped and shared with that exclusive group of compatriots who have: imagination, memory, a dictionary, and an artistic sense.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">But isn\u2019t that the way to be human? The idea of &#8220;being <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">inhuman&#8221; is captivating to me, and I always think being inhuman as reacting instinctually, <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">absorbing what happens to you without reflection, without letting these experiences be adopted through our imagination.<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\"> We become more human the more we retell, reread, rethink, rework. Editing is a way of expanding one\u2019s consciousness. <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Rereading is the only way to really start to understand everything that\u2019s not<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0on the surface.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">As is telling the same joke 40 times until you figure out the right comedic beats. <\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">If I were The Author from\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Invented Part\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">and\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">The Dreamed Part<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, I would probably work in a bit about\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">how the appeal of\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">our \u201cGolden Age of Television\u201d is\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">partially due to the fact that no one wants to reread anymore. Not only do a lot of people listen to podcasts at time-and-a-half to get through them quicker, but they also watch these &#8220;prestige&#8221; shows on slow fast-forward, with the subtitles on.<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0CRAM IT IN YOUR BRAIN. Details and depth don\u2019t matter; everything is a box to be ticked, a product to have consumed.\u00a0<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Relive, rework, reread, rewrite. It\u2019s all in the retelling.<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">And a genius like Fres\u00e1n<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\/<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Nafizi<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\/Nabokov\/Ugresic can transform that clich\u00e9 into something layered and beautiful, written in a way that makes you reflect, that makes you more human.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><span data-contrast=\"auto\">*<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">I\u2019m excited to revisit Nabokov through Nafisi\u2019s lens. <\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">She\u2019s an incredible thinker, and I love the perspective that she lays out in the intro as to why Nabokov:<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Th<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">is was why my students ignored most socially committed novels but love Nabokov\u2014<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">not because they were not politically committed, but because Nabokov\u2019s fiction\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">did not merely question politics of the day but went far beyond that to put on trial all forms of tyrannical mind<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">set. [. . .]<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Worse still, the individuality that Nabokov and so many great American writers had cherished here has been vanishing alongside the public spaces that created bridges between our private and public selves\u2014connecting us to others, helping in the creation of communities that offer a sense of belonging and loyalty without compromising individual integrity. That individualism has been gradually replaced by the solipsism that Nabokov so beautifully evoked in his best work, as the\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">archvillain<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">\u00a0of his stories.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Surely \u201cabsurd,\u201d with all its tragic conno<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">tations, is an apt term to apply to an age identified with Donald Trump. [. . .]<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span data-contrast=\"auto\">In book after book,\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Pnin<\/span><\/i><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, Lolita, Invitation to a Beheading, Bend Sinister, Pale Fire,\u00a0<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">and\u00a0<\/span><i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">Ada<\/span><\/i><span data-contrast=\"auto\">, the villains\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">are the solipsists, those who for one reason or another are too self-involved to hear, see, or feel empathy for others, those who impose not just their will but their prefabricated images and ideas upon real living human beings.\u00a0<\/span><span data-contrast=\"auto\">These new and compelling monsters are among Nabokov\u2019s great contributions to modern fiction. [. . .]<\/span><span data-ccp-props=\"{&quot;335559685&quot;:720}\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>If only there were more hours in the day, weeks left in the summer before the new semester. Although if I time this right, maybe I can finally undertake <em>Ada or Ardor\u00a0<\/em>over winter break. Seems like the right book to bring to <a href=\"https:\/\/ninemaidensbrewing.com\">Nine Maidens Brewing<\/a> . . .<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Some years ago,\u00a0I was invited on an editorial trip to Buenos Aires, where we were given a walking tour of the more literary areas of the city, including a bar where Polish ex-pat Witold Gombrowicz used to hang out.\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 The tour guide told us a story about how Gombrowicz\u00a0hated\u00a0Borges and would frequently, drunkenly, rant about [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":292,"featured_media":424082,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[67486],"tags":[69452,8776,2006],"class_list":["post-424072","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-articles","tag-azar-nafisi","tag-rodrigo-fresan","tag-vladimir-nabokov"],"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/424072","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/292"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=424072"}],"version-history":[{"count":7,"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/424072\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":424202,"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/424072\/revisions\/424202"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/424082"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=424072"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=424072"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.rochester.edu\/College\/translation\/threepercent\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=424072"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}